Editing dialogue after drawing a picture is not so bad
 
Do I have before photos?  NO!  I was unhappy with it, WHY would I take a  photo?   Anyway, this is mostly to share with sis.   I am frustrated that so far all I've really drawn is talking.  Or worse: thinking.  BORING.  Yet obviously not to me.  But at least I realized that I can have my stupid words puttering along with the picture telling a second story.  I need to get some sick outer conflict going on to spice this ish up with.   And then take this OBVIOUS so-and-so-thinks this  monologue and only pepper the (much more interesting) future scenes with allusions to the ideas.  But this is what I have for now.  A reasonable rough draft.   Oh, and I hated with a capital H the original thinking lines.  (I just drew/wrote that part, vs  the conversation, which was already typed and somewhat edited in my jotterpad app.)  So I did a complete re-haul.  Cut out a pic that didn't even fit anymore, and changed his face and hands in the ...
