Editing dialogue after drawing a picture is not so bad
Do I have before photos? NO! I was unhappy with it, WHY would I take a photo? Anyway, this is mostly to share with sis. I am frustrated that so far all I've really drawn is talking. Or worse: thinking. BORING. Yet obviously not to me. But at least I realized that I can have my stupid words puttering along with the picture telling a second story. I need to get some sick outer conflict going on to spice this ish up with. And then take this OBVIOUS so-and-so-thinks this monologue and only pepper the (much more interesting) future scenes with allusions to the ideas. But this is what I have for now. A reasonable rough draft. Oh, and I hated with a capital H the original thinking lines. (I just drew/wrote that part, vs the conversation, which was already typed and somewhat edited in my jotterpad app.) So I did a complete re-haul. Cut out a pic that didn't even fit anymore, and changed his face and hands in the ...